DECEMBER 18,2007 - Pain - Poetry Zone (please comment on at least one poem before posting) - Welcome to the Black Sugar Poetry Board (a gathering place for African-American poets and writers) POST YOUR POEMS OR STORIES! - Message Board - Yuku

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DECEMBER 18,2007

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SOFINEA	DECEMBER 18,2007	Lead	[-]
Posts: 2 (05/04/08 02:58) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Tags : None The attack on me was brutal the pain was immense to be truthful Each blow to my face was destructive What would he have done if not interrupted When we were alone he choked me Talked shit and dared me to disagree Slap me in the mouth until i tasted blood Pinned me down while his knees in my chest dug Told me that my life was worthless Then pounded my face with his fist Pulled my hair and called me a bitch Said that he would kill me if my eyes even twitched I'll never forget the look on his face Or the shape of his mouth when he said the word "Rape"
italian angel poeta		#1	[-]
Posts: 543 (05/05/08 04:24) Administrator Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	wow! I hope writing this helps ease that pain. I wasn't prepaired for this when I clicked it. I hope you heal Dawnny
Shadowkool		#2	[-]
Posts: 460 (05/05/08 11:40) Administrator Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	This piece vividly describes a painful and devastating experience that is repeated far too often in this world (unfortunately). Not sure if this stems from a personal experience of if this was written to bring awareness to this heinous act. I don't want to assume but the words do paint a very sad scene. I agree with Italian above that it was unexpected as the title gives no indication as to what type of poem this was going to be. Once again, glad that you are here sharing your work with us. -Shadowkool-
MzLady03		#3	[-]
Posts: 2 (05/07/08 09:44) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	All I can say is, WOW!!! To many women have been through that and it's a sad circle...
lexvoy		#4	[-]
Posts: 347 (05/25/08 12:07) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	speechless....honestly executed and felt like a cold night

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