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Thanks Again! ]]> feeds@yuku.com (theblack55) http://blacksugarpoetryboard.yuku.com/sreply/2841 Sun, 04 May 2008 09:52:49 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: Erotic Prose: 22 Hours in Paradise ]]> http://blacksugarpoetryboard.yuku.com/reply/2838/t/Erotic-Prose-22-Hours-in-Paradise.html#reply-2838 Tight writing. Creative. I liked the stanza format and also how this scene played out. The character deals with both pleasure and conflict. Has an authentic feel to it as this does happen in real life. Sometimes poems (or stories) go over the top and you are left with this feeling that this is just a fantasy; it can never happen. However, this piece has a realistic feel to it. The contradictory nature between things you shouldn't do (for you know better) and things that... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Shadowkool) http://blacksugarpoetryboard.yuku.com/sreply/2838 Sat, 03 May 2008 23:07:53 GMT <![CDATA[ Erotic Prose: 22 Hours in Paradise ]]> http://blacksugarpoetryboard.yuku.com/topic/1036/t/Erotic-Prose-22-Hours-in-Paradise.html Prologue:

What came over me?

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